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Languageing

by ==Doylum

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Feb 2003 · 8 comments

He creates images he does in words what i don't know in an order thats 10 to 2 he makes comparisons what he calls similes and metaphors cause the're similar to 'is life he makes things pretty as a picture with colours what i could never use and with shapes you've never seen language listen boy, he almost makes it talk

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[9] <~> 13-Feb-03/8:07 AM Reply
how can ilisten when i am so caught up in looking at his face? he moves it.
[n/a] ==Doylum › <~> 13-Feb-03/1:25 PM Reply
Come again?
[9] razorgrin 13-Feb-03/1:14 PM Reply
neato.
[8] horus8 13-Feb-03/4:02 PM Reply
Chirpe... this will make me ponder the chirpensity of my soul while i'm shooting a coors light commercial in mammoth next week. thank you.
[n/a] ==Doylum › horus8 13-Feb-03/4:24 PM Reply
Chirpe as in cheep cheep?
[8] horus8 › ==Doylum 13-Feb-03/6:34 PM Reply
No, no... chirpe as in that annoying fucking sound car alarms make. Chirpe as in the sound of a wounded cell phone stuck up my agent's ass. better?
[n/a] TanHand 13-Feb-03/7:59 PM Reply
Who me??? Or is this yet another poem about your penis??
[n/a] ==Doylum › TanHand 27-Feb-03/3:22 PM Reply
did mother never say "it's not always about you darling"?
of course its about my cock you cock