poemranker ::Happy Kid by ThoughtfulSoul

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Happy Kid

by ThoughtfulSoul

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · Edited 17 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

He always seemed like a happy kid. Never frowning always smiling and always friendly He always played baseball with the other neigborhood kids. He was a straight A student. He had a pretty girlfriend. That boy had a future, a promising one Everyone thought he was a happy kid till his parents found him hung to death and a suicide note attached to his chest.

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5 comments

[10] Bachus 17-Feb-03/2:21 PM Reply
Wow... a two chested happy kid. that's fucking racist... 11!
[7] Garrett S Sexton 17-Feb-03/2:26 PM Reply
DID YOU KILL THE GUY?
[n/a] INTRANSIT 17-Feb-03/2:48 PM Reply
What is that chirping sound? And where is the source?
[7] Garrett S Sexton 17-Feb-03/2:51 PM Reply
not as happy,as the HAPPY KID.
[1] Fear of Garbage 17-Feb-03/5:26 PM Reply
i would rather take a cheese grater to my face than read this