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Free verse № 40664

Rain

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Feb 2003 · 2 comments

Fall on my eyelash Sustain But only for a second Roll down my cheek Ruin my mascara Fall to the ground And make me a puddle Make me my ocean

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[9] deleted user 17-Feb-03/5:56 PM Reply
You will become the ocean....
[8] GekoHawaii 23-Mar-03/6:17 PM Reply
So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...