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Free verse № 40712

stars of wonder

Member since 2003 · Posted 18 Feb 2003 · Edited 18 Feb 2003 · 3 comments

sometimes when it's cold and clear i look at you in my memory and touch you at all my favorite points drawing constellations in my heart and sometimes when it's cold and clear i sit with you in my memory and trace constellations over you over us with all my heart and when i die for you and when i die to you i will trace my heart and hang it in your sky hoping my stars still fit in your universe

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[n/a] <~> 18-Feb-03/3:31 PM Reply
star of wonder, star of night, star with royal beauty bright, westward leading, still proceeding....
[n/a] rompingcat › <~> 3-Mar-03/1:16 AM Reply
stars have no story of their own - it's all our own ifusions
[n/a] rompingcat › rompingcat 3-Mar-03/1:17 AM Reply
infusions more likely.
confusion too