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Free verse № 4074

My Path

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Jul 2002 · Edited 11 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

On the road that I have taken,one day, walking,I awaken,amazed to see where I have come,where I,m going,where I,m from. This is not the path I thought.This is not the place I sought.This is not the dream I bought,just a fever of fate I,ve caught. I,ll change highways in a while,at the crossroads,one more mile.My path is lit by my own fire.I,m only going where I desire. On the road that I have taken,one day,walking,I awaken.One day,walking,I awaken,on the road that I have taken.

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3 comments

[3] horus8 22-Jul-02/6:50 PM Reply
Scrolling sideways gets me king kong pissed and not to mention more eager to see where it's all going(cuz of the artiness, and all) but i got screwed again. Vertical, horizontal, pointless
[n/a] razorgrin 23-Jul-02/5:55 AM Reply
horus is right, scrolling sideways blows bishops.
[7] titan69 8-Aug-02/12:32 PM Reply
thats a long poem!!!!! 7/10