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Pain (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower Through my veins
the cold heart pumps
I feel your pains
my veins now jump
The pain
The pain so real
The cause so plain
Yet you sit there
acting sane
The pain
Just a glimpse
of feeling
on your face
would satisfy my mind
but to no avail
you sit there staring
into space
I know you feel it
I can too...
Pain.
Up the ladder:
Sisters of mercy
Down the ladder:
One Morning
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Posted: July 11, 2002 11:48 PM PDT; Last modified: July 11, 2002 11:48 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.235324 Overall Rank: 4182 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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17-Jul-02/12:07 AM
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Pain has become the fissioned fuel in my lime green chevy nova. I'm feeling Alabama muscle car quick high on false courage. Joe likes dynamite. Local H rocks! Grand prize Monster truck!a
Sparse, but effective.
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