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Free verse № 41510

Mirrors

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Feb 2003 · 0 comments

My life is like a fog that I create for my own danger Not being able to see past my own hedonistic imperative I can't stand mirrors Mirrors show me what eats at the core I can't stand that I don't look happy I look like a lost face in a crowd who could care less I look in love and heartbroken at once I look nuts I look like a madman and maybe I am I can't stand mirrors They only tell the truth when it's permanent

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