domination

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

a puppet on a string a doll to dress up to have something to control because you feel your own lives are out of your hands dress her up in a pretty pink dress and a matching purse with blushing cheeks put up the stage a happy show pulling your joints out of place a string connected to your mouth to make you smile emotions aren't allowed just fake joy for life when inside you are screaming for it to stop

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[4] -=SeTTle=- 29-Jul-02/10:01 PM Reply

WHAT ISN'T MANLY ABOUT PINK

[0] god'swife 22-Aug-02/9:28 AM Reply

great thoughts. really. Lot's of potentional. now write a poem about it. See Christof or babbitt for examples

[8] ShaNoN+960317485 20-Nov-03/6:45 AM Reply

the feeling is there:o)

[7] DevilBuni 25-Feb-05/7:32 PM Reply

I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice