poemranker ::Klondike by LeBlanc

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Klondike

by wLeBlancw

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Mar 2003 · Edited 21 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

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[n/a] Shardik 9-Mar-03/4:30 PM Reply
umm. pardon me Brandon, could you possibly use a stronger metaphor here for the insulting snow? Because...Well...See if my boobs can't be evil and curved then your snow can't passive aggressively insulting.

<AND THE CROWD GOES wild. Evil wins again!!!!!!!!!.
I woulld like to thank Satan, Jews, and Television, also i wanna give a shout out to all of my aborted fetuses that secretely hate me. word. umm i'd like to thank my manager for putting up with my spontaneous nudity and wall knicking wheel chair activities, and last but not least i would like to thank the plague of the future. the crew of the space shuttle r.i.p. idiotic leaders and the ebola virus, and a Catholic church strewn and soaked in homosexuality and aids. (like that's a big surprise)

This, unlike fetuses hating us from heaven, is a fact Brandon, and your future. Thank you folks i'm here all fucking day!
[n/a] wLeBlancw › Shardik 9-Mar-03/5:03 PM Reply
No, pardon me Shardik. I feel really sorry for you. It's apparent that you never felt loved in your life and that you are very angry because of it. It is okay. Killing multiple fetuses is not going to solve your problems neither is yelling at some guy on a forum. Since you're so concerned about humanity, what exactly are you doing to help? Nothing. You just sit at home and bitch. You are a fat and lazy American who just blabbers. Go to a different forum. I'm not here to hear Rush Limbaugh. Thanks.
[n/a] Shardik 9-Mar-03/5:41 PM Reply
Sir, superman is not fat. www.gangbox.com

I have abs of steel and finely crafted hair, and am good at generally, everything.thanks again. nice try. I once shot a mooseknuckle in the Yukon. I served it with a luke warm chiante Brandon. Also; I am surrounded by love, it is you that feels guilty, not i friend, it was your poem.lol. I have a healthy son, and no guilt. LOOK OUT BEHIND YOU! GOOD GOD THE MEWLING OF AN ANgRY FETUS! please. "Do as thou wilt is the whole of the law" Alister Crowely, Rush who? I'm an anarchist idiot not a fucking television personality, but if this was a debate... My friend you lost back at the angry fetus, unless of course you are John Carpenter and designing a new film called 'they're angry, tiny, and slippery' "Bitter Fetus III, the crawl back".
[n/a] Nanshe 11-Mar-03/9:42 PM Reply
I like the "silent insult"; I think 'spurn' needs to be in this piece as well, for the sound, if nothing else. It seems to me as though you need it's bitterness and Mars-like gutturalness, to echo the inner burn.