Frozen

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

The rain has stopped and snow is falling. A world of glass subdued its calling. The streets are empty. The sky is black. I wish for words I could take back My path is frozen as my heart. My tears are ice, they break apart. I walk forever beside my grief, I walk forever this silent street.

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[2] lastobelus 10-Mar-03/2:08 PM Reply

i dunno, maybe you can sell this to Lords of Acid for a buck if you work the word pussy into it somewhere.

[4] maffy 11-Mar-03/8:41 AM Reply

give up please