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All Meta-Verse Shall be Deleted, it is Poison

Member since 2003 · Posted 14 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

the power of poetry's in conjunction: one word only ever serves a function two words together can bring illumination or from an image a new sensation three words together, from outside the syllabus of conversation can make us shiver, an holy unction, or twist our thoughts with dark compunction.

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[n/a] INTRANSIT 14-Mar-03/6:46 AM Reply

Is this a test?

[n/a] lastobelus › INTRANSIT 14-Mar-03/6:52 AM Reply

I'm not sure I follow, a test of what? A test to see if people like it? You can like it if you want, I like it myself, I just have a rule that I don't waste too much time with reflexive poetry because it's a black hole I have trouble climbing out of. So it goes in my garbage can with a self-mocking title.

[n/a] <~> › lastobelus 14-Mar-03/7:32 AM Reply

metrify yourself.
form to follow function. this will help.

[5] cheese.doodles 8-Apr-07/8:56 AM Reply

Hmm, I really like your title.