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Free verse № 44006

The 11th hour

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

Godspeed gentlemen. I pray the deeds expeditious, that you stay within your threads I pray that profanity can be minimal and your ideals not stray. I pray That you secure your enemy and calm the tide. And when all is said and done you may return with pride.

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[n/a] Caducus 14-Mar-03/8:38 AM Reply
Whoa your pens smoking of late
[n/a] INTRANSIT › Caducus 14-Mar-03/10:21 AM Reply
Thanks Caducus. I'm actually feeling rather flat lately.