poemranker ::Tell me I suck by Blindproject217

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Free verse № 44546

Tell me I suck

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Mar 2003 · 8 comments

This is for all the warm thoughtful comments I received. Never a stranger to do the untried Determined and Blank faced I poured out my soul Here, I thought could be a place to confide With your snide remarks and interjections With no point or purpose You load and shoot me down Just to see a rise in me, or a bitter reaction So how is it, now that you have won Is it all you wanted Was this your point Just for amusement just for fun Ill tell you once, and never again, this is how it ends You wont make me quit You wont break me So get all your angry comments for me ready to send Please tell me how much this sucks, thank you.

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8 comments

[7] horus8 17-Mar-03/3:23 PM Reply
Lagniappe, is the word of the week, not suck.
[n/a] Blindproject217 › horus8 17-Mar-03/4:06 PM Reply
hahah ok
[n/a] deleted user 18-Mar-03/3:05 AM Reply
You suck 10". I see Mr. Brownstone's been knocking on your door.
[7] <~> 18-Mar-03/7:33 AM Reply
when i saw the title, i wanted to SOOOO BADLY!!! but i just can't now.

still, there are gaping holes in this. sqeeze it alittle more--<drip, drip, drip> and see what there is to be seen when you unravel it a little more! bravo/a!
[n/a] Blindproject217 › <~> 18-Mar-03/12:07 PM Reply
Cool thanx
[10] Dead Poet 20-Mar-03/9:34 PM Reply
*sniffle* damn thats how i feel! Cause now i know that "poetry" isnt my thing....
[0] razorgrin 2-Apr-03/6:23 AM Reply
You swallow.