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Third Period English

by Sawa

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Mar 2003 · 2 comments

The girl across from us sits With a shining stare. Poetry from her lips spit, Beady eyes aflare. Words fly from her chubby jaw, Falling to the ground; Jutting teeth from gaping maw Mangling the sound. She stumbles and sprays as we Grimace in dismay. How could that hag turn beauty Into sheer blase?

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[9] Bachus 18-Mar-03/1:00 AM Reply
Great.
[8] <~> 18-Mar-03/7:34 AM Reply
without a second thought, that's how.