A Little Peace

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

Kiss my eyes and tell me It'll be alright And if the sun will go down tell me its not night Hold my soul in your arms Don't let go Keep my heart in your hands And I won't go Just a little peace It's not that hard Just a little peace For my heart

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[3] thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-03/12:35 PM Reply

Drivel. oh umm... no... wait... Yeah, just plain drivel. There just isn't anything here. Not trying to be mean but you are way too vague. Who do you want to kiss your eyes? What are you afraid of the dark? Are you just trying to be confusing and pointless in your second stanza? A little peace of/from what? When your poem answers those questions (Or at least some of them) then I'll try and rate you better. For now (hopefully without hard feelings) I give this a -3-. Rewrite it and I'll be happy to give you a higher score.

[n/a] intheailse › thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-Mar-03/12:40 PM Reply

why does it have to answer anything....if anything your'e supposed to answer those things, not me....

[3] thepinkbunnyofdoom › intheailse 21-Mar-03/1:19 PM Reply

Yes in the end but I have to have at least a little information in order to work with.