poemranker ::Gastric Sadness by waltfreakinwhitman

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Haiku № 4490

Gastric Sadness

by waltfreakinwhitman

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Four-piece lunch combo* Ordered with extra hot sauce Tonight, I'll crap fire *Mixed dark meat & white meat, w/biscuit, curly fries (spicy) and medium Pepsi. $3.99 with coupon.

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10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

3 comments

[7] horus8 14-Jul-02/2:19 PM Reply
The astrik side note is high-style, and cutet
[n/a] waltfreakinwhitman 14-Jul-02/3:54 PM Reply
Thanks. The Haiku form is pretty unforgiving. So I decided to expand the form with my use of the asterisk. This allows me to add crucial information to the poem that would otherwise be lost.
[8] Sailing Solo 14-Jul-02/11:23 PM Reply
Didnt like it that ,uch, but I gave you an 8 just for your user name