poemranker ::Is This Love by intheailse

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Is This Love

by intheailse

Member since 2003 · Posted 28 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

Everytime i see her, I'm on fire, She looks so good, everyime. Is this love? I'm not sure, I've never felt, like this before. It's all you need, someone said...... I think it's my turn, instead. Is this love? Will it show? Sonn enough, I will know.

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4 comments

[0] spank me baby yeah 28-Mar-03/11:10 AM Reply
fuck off
[n/a] horus8 28-Mar-03/1:50 PM Reply
Good grief.
[0] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Mar-03/7:47 AM Reply
Oh dear child. I had hoped I'd never have to explain this to anyone ever again. Its not love if you have to ask!! Not to mention you give no detail, nadda, none. This is for all intents and purposes a look at the thoughts inside a teenage adolesant mind. Your giving us shallow thoughts with nothing to base them on. No concept of a landscape inside your head or much less of the world around you. If this isn't the worst poem ever written I'll bet its close. -0-
[0] JackCrawley 29-Mar-03/8:44 AM Reply
Did you just try to rhyme "fire" with "time"? Good Lord.

The only thing worse than a poem that insists on rhyming is a poem that insists on rhyming and fails.