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Limerick № 46661

two flies

by suckmychucks

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Apr 2003 · 8 comments

two flies fucking on the wall- one is a horse fly, one's kind of small. it's nothing to think of just something to see. darling, i'm busy come inconvenience me.

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8 comments

[0] razorgrin 10-Apr-03/11:11 AM Reply
The last line doen't scan. Instead, it irritates like the whiny voice of a zitty teenager. Which, if you think about it, makes sense.
[n/a] suckmychucks › razorgrin 10-Apr-03/11:38 AM Reply
fuck you pus licker.
[0] razorgrin › suckmychucks 11-Apr-03/3:21 PM Reply
I doubt you could. too small and covered in small pimples. Cornhusker.
[n/a] suckmychucks › razorgrin 11-Apr-03/8:14 PM Reply
suck my pimpled cornhusk, you fuckin pseudo-masochist.
[0] razorgrin › suckmychucks 15-Apr-03/11:28 AM Reply
Again, no. Too small.On that topic you know, you can order products off the internet to fix that problem. Where do you get the 'masochist', anyway? As has been shown many a time, I enjoy causing the pain. Now if you refuse to clean my boots, you're going back in your fucking cage. Whiny little bitch.
[0] thepinkbunnyofdoom 10-Apr-03/5:10 PM Reply
Not Very Witty
Not Clever Enough to Be Gay
A horrible piece
I'm forced to say
I wasn't amused in the least little bit
Whining worse than even me
Which is hard I'll admit
A zero I'm afraid it has to be
Thats all you get
[2] deleted user 25-May-03/8:03 PM Reply
It's good but i dont think its classified as a limerick (a-a-b-b-a)
[4] Bhaskaryya 28-Dec-04/10:35 PM Reply
That is NOT a limerick.

Limerick is supposed to be of 5 lines and follow therhyme scheme of aabba