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Free verse № 47348

Toute ma Vie

by talking_goldfish

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Apr 2003 · 6 comments

J’aime le monde en que je suis, C’est parce que vous êtes ici, Tous les fleurs Tous les fleurs, Ils à vous écoutent, Tout le monde, Tout le monde, Ils à vous écoutent, Tous les jours je me lève en regardant vos sourire; Je peut sourire. Une personne. Une raisone. Un amour.

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6 comments

[9] god'swife 17-Apr-03/5:55 PM Reply
Very sweet. Somebody kiss me.
[8] Ranger 17-Apr-03/11:29 PM Reply
Indeed. Has anyone ever had to listen to hours of contemporary French music before? It's hell.
8 I think.
[n/a] talking_goldfish › Ranger 18-Apr-03/5:18 AM Reply
Thanks. Glad you like it.
[8] Ranger › talking_goldfish 18-Apr-03/1:34 PM Reply
That's okay. Nice to see some adventure in the poetry on this site. Now we know that you can do this try to do something more extravagent. You're obviously talented at this, so give me something to smile about!
Good evening (over here it is anyway)!
[8] Ranger › Ranger 18-Apr-03/1:35 PM Reply
Ah, I see you're from bonny ol' Britain too! Good evening then!
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-03/12:52 PM Reply
Je ne parle pas francais.