poemranker ::Sarah by talking_goldfish

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Free verse № 47498

Sarah

by talking_goldfish

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

Incomprehensible. Eyes as blue as the sky on a beautiful summer’s day, To lose myself within, a dream beyond compare. Lost among the golden sands Of a place so far away, Lost beneath a sea so blue That even mermaids play. Undeniable. When the day turns into night and the light begins to fade, The stars shine out for love, they shine for you and I. When the birds sing out each morn They sing your name so sweet, And that they’ll sing for all of time For you make me complete. Sarah. Sarah. I love you.

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[9] Ranger 20-Apr-03/1:22 AM Reply
Very nice!
[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-Apr-03/1:28 PM Reply
Sarah? That's a jewish name. More Jewish idolatry gone amuck.