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Free verse № 47529

Letters

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

I must have written hundreds of letters to you. Letters I've never sent Torn them up in a rage, then realised they're still there. Not broken, like me, I've wanted to tell you, all my life I have loved you, But you've never been listening. I screamed it at you, you thought I was joking, but I wasn't. I wish you were here now, then maybe I'd properly tell you, maybe I'd just keep quiet, knowing me I would. This is the one letter I will send, A final letter to my only love, It doesn't matter what you think, not now because when you read this, I'll be dead.

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[7] bondjedi 20-Apr-03/12:59 PM Reply
the death rattle of a stalker.
[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos 20-Apr-03/2:07 PM Reply
you will of course wait a bit whilst I take out an insurance policy, I gather?
[n/a] razorgrin 22-Apr-03/12:03 PM Reply
I advise throwing an apple.