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Understand

Member since 2003 · Posted 21 Apr 2003 · Edited 28 Apr 2003 · 4 comments

Too many times I have missed the chance Overlooked the opportunities Always searching for a way to tell you Never finding the right moment Denying the severity of the emotions Relying on another conversation topic Eliminating any possible talk about What my heart can only dream.

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4 comments

[4] sir_heff 22-Apr-03/9:23 AM Reply
i think you should revise the last 3 lines
[8] horus8 28-Apr-03/11:33 PM Reply
My heart understands only buttered crawdads and old mill'.
[0] god'swife 29-Apr-03/2:53 AM Reply
Again, the catch-alls...

chance
opportunities
a way
moment
emotion
conversation topic? (that's awful)
possible talk
dream

Can you be specific please. Pretend your writing a news article, just the facts.
[8] lexxie100 5-Jul-07/2:09 PM Reply
expresses something that i think everyone has felt at some time or another. very true.