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Free verse № 47653

The Days Are Dying

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

(16.12.86) In listless whispers blow the days Their greens are jaded, their blues are gray The sun is stale and burnt 'round the edges Creation is sunk into a mire Of swampy inconsequentiality The days are dying... I fished my man out of this pallid pond -- He was the only fish alive Now, we're both rotting in the sun.

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[9] INTRANSIT 22-Apr-03/6:35 AM Reply
bingo.