Loss I havn't yet known

by cleverdevice

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Apr 2003 · 6 comments

Nothing can hurt more Than the death of someone close, I should imagine.

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6 comments

[7] deleted user 22-Apr-03/6:29 PM Reply

hmm, kinda plan

[7] deleted user › deleted user 22-Apr-03/6:30 PM Reply

plain*

[n/a] cleverdevice › deleted user 23-Apr-03/2:04 PM Reply

I was just trying to counter the waves of false emotion I see here, friends and family all dying and what-have-you. Some of it could be real, but not all of it. Its fairly similar to how I'd imagine Phillip Larkin to write should he ever have deleved into Haiku form

[7] Ranger 23-Apr-03/11:19 AM Reply

Hey cd how's it going? Have you revised anything yet? I most definitely haven't. Ah well.
Nice poem, short (heh, it's a haiku), blunt and certainly true. It's already garnered a 7 so that shall be the standard by which I shall follow. Good Evening, sir!

[n/a] cleverdevice › Ranger 23-Apr-03/2:02 PM Reply

revise, i don't know what you mean?

[6] Robert K Foster 11-Jun-03/5:24 AM Reply

haven't