poemranker ::the real 2 by bxjay170

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Free verse № 47790

the real 2

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Apr 2003 · 1 comment

i was told men never cry so i guys am confuse cauze i been crying all my life stuck in thi dirt hole wordering why i was delk this hand ti'll this day i still can't understand these aint words from my mind its pain from my heart my life is falling apart or is it forming a destiny i must pass by to get where my dreams are is this a test, is this a game or am i a mistake no matter how low i get i never let myself think i failed my life is like a song its all in detail i remember as a young kid crying tellin my mom to exhale and never to bow down to such a fake male looking at all this in the streets ofcourse i grew a mastermind u say u love me so why pops u left me in the grind naw your kid aint fine most people tell me i aint worth a dime i wish the world knew there was so much more to me this aint just poetry

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[8] bondjedi 24-Apr-03/5:26 AM Reply
wretched. since that's the point, i give you an 8. well done