poemranker ::PLAYMOBIL by Garrett S Sexton

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Free verse № 48025

PLAYMOBIL

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Apr 2003 · 2 comments

DEATH OR GLORY,THERE THEY STOOD,PLASTIC WITH SMILEY PAINTED FACES. AT A CHILD GOD'S HAND,THEY WAITED. DEATH OR GLORY,THEY BATTLED,PLASTIC WITH SMILEY PAINTED FACES. THEN IT WAS DONE,BACK IN THE BOX,OBLIVION. AND THERE THEY WAITED.

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[8] horus8 26-Apr-03/3:34 PM Reply
Tidy.
[8] richa 27-Apr-03/5:03 AM Reply
this is good
One of your own technical structures?