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Safe haven

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Apr 2003 · 4 comments

Upon entering the bathroom I notice the toilet paper is late. A closet is neatly organized and the door is closed. The basement is never occupied. Probably due to spiders. The coffee table is shin high. I have many broken toes. Fool hardy ways of living in and around a house.

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[n/a] JakeBike 28-Apr-03/8:44 AM Reply
late toilet paper?

did you left-hand it?
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Apr-03/5:18 PM Reply
That's one way, but i'd end it a bit more 'out to lunch'and deatachable.
"in the dog house" or
With plastic covered furniture"
or
"high on flinstone vitamins". or not.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <{Baba^Yaga}> 28-Apr-03/6:12 PM Reply
Maybe one more couplet also?
[8] Jill Stockinger 29-Dec-20/4:11 PM Reply
Enjoyed the humor!