Lyric № 4835

This Strange Feeling

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

What is it inside me that feels so funny? Feels really furry, like a soft bunny. A feeling that I never felt before But now I want it more and more. A little tingle runs through me Wanting to get out to be free. All this extra energy that I want to let go, A firework of sparks flying high and low. Simething icy cold melted my heart, Is this thing a form of art? Or a heavenly thing sent from above? Could this strange feeling really be love?

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4 comments

[2] kawakurdi 16-Jul-02/2:35 PM Reply

funny, fairy and bunny do not fit with the conclusion of the poem.

[6] horus8 16-Jul-02/3:45 PM Reply

Shhh.. be very, very qwuiet...I'm huntin Wabbits.. huuuuu.. huu.

[4] razorgrin 18-Jul-02/6:07 AM Reply

you only get a 4.That 4 is because I like bunnies.the poem otherwise is sappy and dull.

[7] sliver 25-Jul-02/8:14 PM Reply

Work on the depth of your language'
Your rhyme scheme is basic, like mine, But I like it