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Free verse № 48416

Kites In My Sky

Member since 2002 · Posted 1 May 2003 · 1 comment

(9.9.99) My eyes opened on an empty sky But the colour was blue Of deep deep cobalt; Of big and small Pieces of fortune I made my choice I watched my sky Fill up There are now Many kites in my sky.

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[7] anyone 1-Apr-04/1:05 PM Reply
The ending is a bit choppy rhythmically