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Nicotine Ruse

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

Ballet Dancing ash tray amazing ballancing ciggarette. Chimney smoking lung destroying air burning. Lead me to my death.

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[7] horus8 16-Jul-02/1:45 AM Reply

The serial killer smoked left handed. Schooled by nuns. Abused. He was slow to ash his Lucky strike. Not yet old. Twenty-seven, but moving ever farther from seventeen.(keep up the good work. short and sweet)

[n/a] Red_is_life 16-Jul-02/2:05 AM Reply

I really wasnt sure about this one because my style has changed so much recently (read flies or black hole soul) and I wasnt sure what the new style comes across as. Thanx lol

[8] shwenatjadeflower 16-Jul-02/11:52 PM Reply

i think the thirrd line shoud be swithched to say cigarette balancing, but its kool.

[0] poetandknowit 16-Aug-02/8:01 AM Reply

Another dead poet. This sucks dead poet.