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Ode To Mushroomhead

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 May 2003 · 4 comments

Wide Eyed Sleepers, Death In Motion, Daylight Creepers Wearing All Night Pain Bleeding Moments Spilling Over Non-existing As They Crawl Out Into A World That Calls Them Real *CHORUS* Sign The Contract It's The Final Act Matter Of Fact Better Take A Step Back Relax The Show Must Go On No One So On And So On As If Under Mass Hypnosis The Wide Eyed Sleepers Fall Into Mass Graves They'll Feel Safer In The Dirt Their Own Opinions Won't Be Heard If Asked Could You Decide What Any Man Is Worth Could You Decide? They Steal It With A Handshake Seal It With A Smile It Feels Like An Earthquake Treats You Like A Child Defeats You With Your Mistakes Leaves You In Denial Deceives You In The First Place Lied To All The While They Can't See Anymore How Their Wide Eyes Have Made Them Blind In Spite Of Themselves The Final Act by Mushroomhead

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[10] Shardik 11-May-03/12:46 PM Reply
lol.
[n/a] Ranger 16-May-03/7:58 AM Reply
Ye-es
[n/a] Beseech › Ranger 16-May-03/8:00 AM Reply
Ye-es what?
[n/a] beakism › Beseech 16-May-03/9:03 AM Reply
Ye-es Are You German? If Not, Why Do You Feel The Need To Capitalize Everything?