poemranker ::Be Not Afraid Of Dying. by Mr Pig

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Haiku № 48971

Be Not Afraid Of Dying.

by Mr Pig

Member since 2003 · Posted 11 May 2003 · Edited 12 May 2003 · 6 comments

Death is the eighth day, It has no end, no sunsets, mortals live their dreams.

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6 comments

[7] Shardik 11-May-03/5:23 PM Reply
You are awesome at freeform, but your haikus are consistently off. this one's 5 7 6.
[n/a] Mr Pig › Shardik 12-May-03/5:09 AM Reply
Thank you for pointing that out I had one too many brandys last night but have corrected to thr 5-7-5 format.

God Bless you Sir
[8] Caducus 12-May-03/8:09 AM Reply
not your best but still good and a message of hope that i liked 8
[8] richa 12-May-03/10:21 AM Reply
yes I like the tone of the haiku, seems to work with the sentiment.
Also its reasoning is very succinct
[10] INTRANSIT 18-May-03/8:55 AM Reply
Works for me.
[9] Ranger 13-Sep-06/10:15 PM Reply
Sweet, traditional English meets traditional Japanese. Blessed.