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Free verse № 49073

Search Engine

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 May 2003 · 4 comments

A twelve pack of two, A tear running down his cheek, Another blind date, and a dream girl he'll never meet She was the one He pushed to hard She said yes on the phone but no in her heart Another girl, Date number two, Alone again with a lonely beer She was the one SWF w/ open mind and great personality He found her on the same page as his used Schwinn His search continues on He'll find the one Chugging on and in between

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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> 14-May-03/12:55 AM Reply
unfinished, but great. Suprise, bet you thought i'd never say that?.
[n/a] OneFingerAnswer › <{Baba^Yaga}> 15-May-03/1:10 AM Reply
Ummm... I thought you'd say it. Not about this one but I know you give credit where you think it's due.

I actually don't like this one much and I wanted help with it.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 14-May-03/7:13 PM Reply
Deeply touching but I'm not sure why. -10-
[9] tre 2-Apr-04/9:06 AM Reply
i like it