poemranker ::Warmth by shwenatjadeflower

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Free verse № 49817

Warmth

Member since 2002 · Posted 21 May 2003 · 4 comments

A moment of panic grips me A tight grasp forbids me to move The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I am warm here. Sunlight glows through strands of your golden hair Framing your body and face Like an aura, making everything clear The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I have all but forgotten the sun A light much brighter shines from within your eyes Stained glass blue that's clear I am warm here. Your eyes are a vague hue Through a cloud of feeling as we kiss And you envelop me further, dissolving my fear Like and aura, making everything clear.

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4 comments

[8] INTRANSIT 21-May-03/7:45 PM Reply
Were you attempting a villanelle?
[8] horus8 › INTRANSIT 21-May-03/8:28 PM Reply
She was attempting a full gainor Sir Cooredrectum.
[8] Roisin 22-May-03/10:54 AM Reply
Really beautiful-nice one 8
[6] Felzpoet 22-May-03/2:53 PM Reply
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also
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