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Blush Of The Winter Rose

by kassanna

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 May 2003 · 10 comments

He came in the winter of my soul When my heart lie silent and still When the beauty of youthful summers had passed And life's hand held me clenched in it's bitter chill Many seasons my spirit lie dormant and frozen Awaiting the warmth only love could bring And then he arrived on the winds of fate Destiny brought forth her burst of Spring His gentleness fell like a fine dewy mist And bathed me in laughter,his words how they nourished And like a young seedling tended with care Resurrected again, I stregnthened and flourished Then when my petals regained vibrant blush He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh For the season of planting had come to it's end It was time for my gardner to bid his goodbye Oh how I miss this gardner of love Perhaps one day he shall see how I've grown I'm strong and thriving though winter's at hand Sustained on memories of love once shown Poetry by Kassanna copyright:2001 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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[10] BleedingRose 27-May-03/7:17 AM Reply
I love it! Okay, i might be a little biased just because of my little rose 'problem.' I think the rose can be used in so many ways to convey emotions like the rejuvination in your poem. I also like the simple rhyme scheme. It's beautiful!
[n/a] Bachus › BleedingRose 27-May-03/12:40 PM Reply
No, it can't. three hundred to 500 years ago yes, but now... No. Try instead plastic posies... Now that's true love, roses, are way outdated, and all ready done a million ways better in poems you two still have yet to read, and never could come remotely close to writing nearly as well.
[n/a] kassanna › Bachus 27-May-03/1:14 PM Reply
roses may be outdated...but they still bare a prick
[10] BleedingRose › Bachus 27-May-03/6:39 PM Reply
Wow, you sound like a senile old English professor. Yet in your other posts you have the rantings of a hormone imbalanced porn king wanna-be with an inferiority complex. To answer you're response, I say your love is false. Using plastic posies as a symbol of love would be as using a woman's breasts to symbolize sex. As for my writings, I do not intend to be as good or better than any other writer, I merely convey my feelings in a way presentable to others. So I will continue to use the rose as my symbol of love and passion, and you can skip my writings if so you wish.
[n/a] Bachus 27-May-03/12:28 PM Reply
"He came in the winter of my soul" Yes! he came all over it. "Then when my petals regained vibrant blush
He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh". Baby, I would slurp on that tight little vulva of yours until you projectile orgasmed all over my dual face, and baby, I would gargle that hot steaming piss and go back for round 'the two'. I would introduce your ankles to your earlobes while my toes did the comforter dig/crawl. I would have my thumb prying in your hot sweet mouth while the other hand clenched head hair then I'd vibrate like an epileptic don juan until your eyeballs went satanic.
[n/a] kassanna › Bachus 27-May-03/12:52 PM Reply
ah Bachus,seems you have me confused with another contortionist...the last time my ankels were introduced to my earlobes was in the womb...by the way..no one has been this graphic with me in over 25 years....and he saw my satanic eyes just before he became fish food.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> › kassanna 27-May-03/12:56 PM Reply
Ah, but if you'd've read your mythology you'd know what happened to the last crew that tried to turn me into fish food wouldn't you love muffin.
[n/a] kassanna › <{Baba^Yaga}> 27-May-03/1:11 PM Reply
lol Baba....did you sweep them under a rug with your magic broom?
[10] lil cindy lu who 27-May-03/3:27 PM Reply
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-May-03/6:18 PM Reply
Yes Roses are out dated but nowhere other than the title does it actually say rose. I think Its a little harash to say that they'll Never write that well Bachus, I mean hey who knows? I give this a -7- cause its not bad but is a bit cliche(no offense), even tho you did the cliche well, I'm afraid I've seen better.