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Free verse № 50464

The other side of a rainbow

Member since 2003 · Posted 27 May 2003 · Edited 27 May 2003 · 3 comments

All the white clouds have turned gray From the darkest points come the lightning with its brilliance Fully charged with pure angry honesty Shouting loud enough absolutely clear for the world to hear Only to be drowned out by the rain These are the troubled waters that fall and surround us As I stand at the mercy of this storm that was once a bright and sunny day I have to wonder if the darkness will ever fade

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3 comments

[8] Blue Magpie 27-May-03/8:39 PM Reply
Not bad imagery here. I like it.
[10] deleted user 28-May-03/12:01 AM Reply
Good Good Good Good Perfect. Working hard.
[0] lunar 4-Jun-03/9:02 AM Reply
I like ur picture - not how i thought ud look at all but hey im not psycic!