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Free verse № 51664

wish

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Jun 2003 · 9 comments

y o u w e r e h e r e w h e r e t h e p a r t i c l e s s t i l l b e a m t h r o u g h m y o w n p a r t i c u l a r l i g h t v i s i o n o f l o v e i n s o m e b a c k l i t d r e a m.

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9 comments

[n/a] INTRANSIT 5-Jun-03/7:33 AM Reply
sweet. Suite! SU-WEET!
[n/a] daniella › INTRANSIT 14-Jun-03/9:08 PM Reply
as a matter of faqs, i had scribbled this on my wall in my bedroom suite.....
[7] horus8 5-Jun-03/10:24 AM Reply
Cute.
[n/a] daniella › horus8 20-Jun-03/9:47 PM Reply
cute... CUté
[8] richa 5-Jun-03/10:50 AM Reply
interesting set out,
It can be read as a single line,
Very sweet sentiment
[n/a] daniella › richa 28-Oct-15/5:16 PM Reply
thanks richa
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 5-Jun-03/2:49 PM Reply
Indeed.
[9] embersandenvelopes 5-Apr-04/8:36 PM Reply
concise and beautiful
[n/a] daniella › embersandenvelopes 28-Oct-15/5:15 PM Reply
thank you thank you embersandenvelopes