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sand between the toes

Member since 2003 · Posted 6 Jun 2003 · 1 comment

jaded moon across the ocean tide !! ripple through my feet alive!! dont stop the crushing of the waves because my soul will concave upon itself and lose its meaning and flow into the white foam tide receeding

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