it should be "you're" a contraction for "you are" not "your" which is a possessive pronoun.
after that, try some more substance, more specific details, images, etc.
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a rather boring poem with a generic point... not to mention that it's "you're," not "your." there's nothing wrong with a short, cute poem; just give it more distinction and more impact.
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after that, try some more substance, more specific details, images, etc.
click on "best" at the top and read through those. you can learn a lot here.
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