LIVE FROM CHEYENNE,WY. "The Forgeters!"

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Jun 2003 · Edited 24 Jun 2003 · 4 comments

And the crowd goes wild But the stage remains vacant They forgot to show But wait, what is this? They repel down from blimp, then forget how to play John, remarks to Joe, "Let's get fucking lost, and forget we saw that."

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[4] eliastemplar 6-Aug-03/9:56 AM Reply

Here is a forward from a book, Grass Sandals about
Basho

"Traditionally, poems in the form called haiku are
characterized by seventeen sylable broken into three
lines with five, seven, and five syllable
respectively. Each haiku includes language that
appeals to two of the five senses - sight, hearing,
smell, touch, and taste, or the additional sense of
movement."

[n/a] Bachus › eliastemplar 6-Aug-03/3:31 PM Reply

http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42592
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Thanks for the tip, but I'm aware of more than just one style of writing haikus, vilanelles, sestinas, lyrics, odes and limericks, concrete, dada, and many others, but I appreciate the information none the less, thank you.

[2] ChaseValentine 27-Apr-05/2:35 PM Reply

Uh...what? Also, hey, whatever happened to Haikus just being, you know, one stanza?

[9] jesslew 13-Mar-07/7:13 PM Reply

i like the inclusion of a blimp
this poem was stellar!