poemranker ::post-burnout by jay_dace

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Free verse № 5426

post-burnout

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Jul 2002 · 1 comment

no motion in here for quite enough time daddy's drawer padlocked with complicated ways of thinking inside now i have grown to rely too much on my own stagnation so much so that mountains would swell into my backyard sidewalks would spit me into the streets the sky would throw up winds around me my rock would catch me teetering on the edges my essence would burst through my skin if i were to effervesce

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[6] dilips_10 20-Jul-02/3:25 AM Reply
make it more exuberant!!!