A Little Cold Spot

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

There's a space Empty and waiting Someone should fill it As I rest and sleep I run my hands over The cold spot The empty sheets And I wonder Where you are And if you ever Think of me And if you save That cold spot Like I save mine Just for you

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[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Jul-03/7:42 PM Reply

That could be chiseled more, but it's much better.

[n/a] emeraldskies › <{Baba^Yaga}> 8-Jul-03/8:10 PM Reply

Thanks...the others I posted are older, the first one I made was a more recent one...