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Free verse № 55603

Musehearts Swimming Lessons

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Jul 2003 · Edited 9 Jul 2003 · 10 comments

-- Sink or Swim OH -=- NO -BABY- You're Drowning COD: Suffocation From Inhalation Of H2O FINAL CONCLUSION W-E-A-K

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10 comments

[n/a] deleted user 9-Jul-03/12:15 AM Reply
:) -0-
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › deleted user 9-Jul-03/12:17 AM Reply
Its a thousand times better than yours hunny. I cant wait to see TanHand fart on you. ;P
[10] horus8 9-Jul-03/12:34 AM Reply
What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July?

"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › horus8 9-Jul-03/12:40 AM Reply
:) Thankies! a 10?? im flattered. did i really earn it??? really?
_dies_from_internal_orgasmic_storm_ AHHH UNGH. hehehehe
[n/a] deleted user › horus8 9-Jul-03/12:55 AM Reply
I don't know what you are talking about.
I know why I'm up all night, what's your excuse?

I am overwhelmed at the attention I am getting here. ;-)
[n/a] DreamerSupreme › deleted user 9-Jul-03/1:06 AM Reply
Methamphetamines idiot. You're up all night setting up and preparing your grave and funeral? you succeeded.

Lots of attention, especially concerning BURIAL.
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 9-Jul-03/11:50 AM Reply
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › thepinkbunnyofdoom 10-Jul-03/1:02 AM Reply
do i? -shrug- thanks for the 10. 2 tens ;D
[0] gorbichoff 10-Oct-03/9:19 PM Reply
uh
[9] un_oying 11-Oct-03/6:52 PM Reply
duh