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New Forms

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jul 2003 · 5 comments

New age, new light new friends, new fights. New forms of pasture and scenic veiws of cynical bastards. Foaming at the tips of the sands a storm is glowing. New forms of Love, new forms of Hate, Impudic dreams of quarrels and heat. New forms of illusory fields, sliding my fingers through the air with finnesse. The clouds are cumulous today, the skies are boundful in play. New forms, new sounds, new age, no frowns.

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5 comments

[5] Blue Magpie 13-Jul-03/10:07 PM Reply
Spelling = views, question boundful, do you mean bountiful

A little repetitive on the New Forms bit.
[9] Tahlia 13-Jul-03/10:20 PM Reply
I really liked this, wonderfully descriptive!
[n/a] Rodavlas › Tahlia 14-Jul-03/9:55 AM Reply
thanks
[7] richa 14-Jul-03/8:58 AM Reply
yes nice little rhythm running through this

I'd get rid of hate....heat it seems to clah
[n/a] Rodavlas › richa 14-Jul-03/9:57 AM Reply
i thought about that when i was typing it out again... maybe i'll actually change it.

sorry about my spelling errors..