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Free verse № 56213

SILENT ECHOES

by Tahlia

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Jul 2003 · 5 comments

The words that I utter, in sarcastic critique. Shall be the pebbles, on my path of tomorrow. You do me no wrong, your “mistakes,” are my own... reflection. Mirrored image of verbal deception, professing my own silent failures. In this vast expanse, my universe, let me learn of myself, not at others expense remembering... Everything echoes me.

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5 comments

[7] Rodavlas 14-Jul-03/8:08 AM Reply
a blip of emotion..extend.
[8] richa 14-Jul-03/8:23 AM Reply
yes nicely put together
[8] bazz 14-Jul-03/4:18 PM Reply
nice.. it's easy to see its beauty in its simplicity.. <8>
[10] SupremeDreamer 14-Jul-03/11:36 PM Reply
Amen, Amen... thou art blessed with 10.
[n/a] god'swife 15-Jul-03/10:26 AM Reply
Don't like the ... after own; mis-leading. Edit out 'my universe'.