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Suffocating (Free verse) by mytenderrage Everything
Is just crashing down.
Pushing.
Harder.
Pressuring.
I feel the weight.
I feel the pain.
I can???t breathe.
I can???t hold on.
I can???t.
It???s just pushing me harder.
Crashing against me.
My pain and torment.
My aching form
Forlorn and lost
Lying under
The large solid.
It???s crushing me
It???s pushing against me
Hard.
I cannot breathe.
I cannot move.
I cannot do anything.
I am suffocating.
I just lie there helplessly
As I am crushed.
By my own misery.
Up the ladder:
Fingers 'Round My Heart
Down the ladder:
WHY
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Posted: July 22, 2002 1:38 PM PDT; Last modified: July 22, 2002 1:38 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.5965877 Overall Rank: 12531 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 142.166.109.217
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22-Jul-02/1:46 PM
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Dear god! The angst! It's attacking!!GAAAAHHHH!Run!Save yourselves!
I read all your poems. Genuine feelings expressed clearly and simply. Why all this pessimism, desperation and pain and you are only 18? Look at the brighter side of life and its beautiful possibilities.
There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".
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