Suffocating

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 3 comments

Everything Is just crashing down. Pushing. Harder. Pressuring. I feel the weight. I feel the pain. I can???t breathe. I can???t hold on. I can???t. It???s just pushing me harder. Crashing against me. My pain and torment. My aching form Forlorn and lost Lying under The large solid. It???s crushing me It???s pushing against me Hard. I cannot breathe. I cannot move. I cannot do anything. I am suffocating. I just lie there helplessly As I am crushed. By my own misery.

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[n/a] razorgrin 22-Jul-02/1:46 PM Reply

Dear god! The angst! It's attacking!!GAAAAHHHH!Run!Save yourselves!

[5] kawakurdi 22-Jul-02/1:46 PM Reply

I read all your poems. Genuine feelings expressed clearly and simply. Why all this pessimism, desperation and pain and you are only 18? Look at the brighter side of life and its beautiful possibilities.

[7] ARTIE 22-Jul-02/3:10 PM Reply

There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".