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Free verse № 56563

beyond sences

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jul 2003 · 10 comments

when you see,not with your eyes you see When you hear, not with your ears you listen When words never spoken, pass through your lips Is when the truth those words shall be.

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10 comments

[6] Terence 17-Jul-03/7:03 AM Reply
A very mysterious 6 for you, I think.
[n/a] calilegzzz › Terence 17-Jul-03/10:36 PM Reply
A good mysterious or a not so good one?(hehe)
[n/a] Christof 17-Jul-03/7:48 AM Reply
This is very Yoda-like. I don't think I believe I word of it.
[n/a] calilegzzz › Christof 17-Jul-03/10:38 PM Reply
I am afraid I feel some what sorry for you then, to believe my poem would mean you have experienced it as well.....there is still time!!!
[n/a] richa 17-Jul-03/10:05 AM Reply
pardon, where are you anyway

[n/a] calilegzzz › richa 17-Jul-03/10:38 PM Reply
As in geographicaly speaking or mentaly speaking?(hehe)
[7] Jeremi B. Handrinos 18-Jul-03/3:17 PM Reply
At first I was going to glue this to my neighbor's face, but then I enjoyed your finally.
[7] SupremeDreamer 18-Jul-03/9:06 PM Reply
I like it.. but i think it could have been better written/presented. 7.
[n/a] calilegzzz › SupremeDreamer 19-Jul-03/12:48 AM Reply
Thank you, and I have to agree with you. I never really was happy with it it dosent really flow the way I would like, but I do believe it was a bad day and I really wasnt "flowing" realy great either. It is one I will be returning to at a later date!!
[7] SupremeDreamer › calilegzzz 19-Jul-03/4:06 AM Reply
I certainly will be happy the day i see it improved. ;)