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Free verse № 5662

Small and Simple

Member since 2002 · Posted 22 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

What seperated us was Small and Simple A misunderstanding Words were said too fast We stumbles over ourselves We just got lost in the confusion What seperated us was Small and Simple You weren't listening I couldn't hear you It was late and we were tired Just tired that's all What seperated us was Small and Simple Now do you understand Just a misuderstanding

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[5] ARTIE 22-Jul-02/3:28 PM Reply
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
[1] kawakurdi 22-Jul-02/4:56 PM Reply
If we could understand misunderstanding there would be no act of misunderstanding in the first place. A pointless argument.
[n/a] venusdemilo 22-Jul-02/9:05 PM Reply
pardon the typos... my deepest apologies.
[n/a] venusdemilo 22-Jul-02/9:09 PM Reply
thats the whole point of the poem... the paradox in the explaination.