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Free verse № 57310

Desert Rain

Member since 2003 · Posted 24 Jul 2003 · 7 comments

[I am SupremeDreamer..] Simple moody tune.. Here I stand on a dune, Presperation driping away, Cheek to cheek it slips.. Smiling the sun, All its blaze going my way. All I can do is laugh, Because I ain't got nothin to say. The wind cooling My face, works tears Drying, and blown away. My hair, brown and worn Floating in the air. Me and this desert, One lovely pair. The rains going to come, Shutting out the suns rays. Just getting ready for Rainy days. Watch the drops Soak with the sand, And begin to river. The river is going To get bigger, and I'm not going to be Struck down from its Force.. That girl on the horizon.. Sunny eyes, soon we will Stand, and be the desert Once again..

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7 comments

[9] Druid_Girl_1984 27-Jul-03/1:57 PM Reply
I like the imagine it provokes.
[9] Druid_Girl_1984 27-Jul-03/1:58 PM Reply
shit! i meant image
[n/a] horus8 › Druid_Girl_1984 27-Jul-03/2:32 PM Reply
Of course you did.
[n/a] horus8 27-Jul-03/2:30 PM Reply
[I am cheese man] Lord of the melt. lol.
You lie! You're bald! Bald! And you live in a hut in new guinnea.
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › horus8 27-Jul-03/2:39 PM Reply
No, i dont lie. And, YES he IS me. because i made HIM.. relax jim, smoke another clit and have some more vodka...
[n/a] horus8 › SupremeDreamer 27-Jul-03/3:14 PM Reply
Don't mind if I do, can I whistle?
[n/a] SupremeDreamer › horus8 27-Jul-03/3:17 PM Reply
sure man, i love that whistle.. reminds me of that one tune in Once Upon A Time In America.. i loved that movie..