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orange vanilla sky

by ~ska~

Member since 2003 · Posted 25 Jul 2003 · 2 comments

Orange Vanilla Sky, All the things implied, Seem to go away. All the things said, We dragged, bled in dread All seem to go away. If it made any sence For you and your absence. I want to fly away. From everything here, All i've learned is fear, Is this all for me? And if i fall away, Remeber me each day And i'll be let free. Over Orange Vanilla Sky I'll fly and wave good-bye, I'll be let free.

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[n/a] DurtKL 25-Jul-03/1:51 PM Reply
where did it go away to?
where was it in the first place?
what is orange vanilla sky?

thank you
[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> 25-Jul-03/2:22 PM Reply
Any "sence"? Have you given any thought to what you might do with yourself once you begin living.